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Friday, 15 April 2016

Ice - Cream Sandwich

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frozen, squashed, delightful, hard, crispy, fluffy,

WALHT: write a descriptive paragraph.

I couldn’t wait to try the scrumptious dessert. I had excitement flowing within me. The fluffy filling is squashed together with a soft cracker. Chewy chunks are shown throughout the dessert. The soft cracker covers the filling. It tastes smooth and very chewy. You could feel the frost of the dessert as you take your first bite.

1 comments:

Petuana @ Glen Innes School said...

Talofa Lava Shanelle,

WOW! I really enjoyed reading your descriptive paragraph on your Ice-cream sandwich I thought the words that you used were really good! I had one and I enjoyed it did you? Did you think that the Ice-cream sandwich was just right?

Keep it up!

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