Trapped Inside A Warehouse

WALT: write a narrative with focus on a powerful intro.

Trapped Inside The Warehouse

“La la la la la la la la ahhhhhh!” Ally gasps. “OMG. That is one beautiful dress. Mum, mum can we go to the mall? I have found this nice dress and I really want it. Please mama please.” “ Fine then, but we have to go after 7o,clock because I have an important meeting.” said her mum.

“ I’m getting a new dress, I’m getting a new dress.” happily sang Ally. “ Quickly though because it is very late and you have school tomorrow. angrily said her mum. Ally looked for the dress in all the stores until she remembered that the shop was called “ The Warehouse.” “ Which direction is the Warehouse.” “ Quickly Ally before they close the Warehouse.” Ally runs everywhere and she finally finds the Warehouse.

As soon as she got inside the Warehouse a announcement went off. “ Ladies and gentlemen the store is about to close in 5 minutes.” Ally wasn't interested in the announcement and started searching for the dress. As soon as she found it, people were closing up and locking the gates. Ally didn't know because she was putting and fitting on the dress.

Ally realized that there was no chatter in the store. She quickly got changed and went out of the dressing room. She only saw her mum but no one else. She was surprised. She saw the gates closed and no one around. Ally was nervous and started to cry. Then they realized that the Warehouse wasn't going to be opened until next Monday.

Just when they thought they were going to be trapped forever, Ally screamed “oh yeah no school tomorrow.” but as she was singing the song she saw a person. He started walking over to them and he said “Why are  you still here?” Ally realized that it was the manager of the store. Ally knew that it was time to go home.

“ Will Ally, wasn't that an adventure?” said Mum. “ Yes it was yes it was.” signed Ally, but she was happy that she had her dress that she has always wanted.

Combined Story

Walt: write a combined story.

Pythons Taking Action

African pythons are known to be poisonous and very deadly, they also can have rapid speed on their prey. African pythons obviously live in Africa near the river side where most animals live. The python will eat any animal that it finds. They have scales as much as a fish, they also are really long. African pythons slither fast but quietly because they do not want their prey to notice them.

When python's search for its prey they go to the river as that is where all animals go to drink water. As the python soon reached the water it saw a hippo in the water and hippos are the most deadliest animals. Slithering out of the water it camouflages itself to hide away from the hippo. The python camouflaged the whole night waiting patiently for the hippo to go away.

As the night goes by, the hippo falls asleep. Thats when the python takes action. As midday comes by, it got ready for his ambush. When the springbok was in place it  waited for the correct timing and exploded out of the water for its jaw open wide. Squeezing the springbok and coiling around it the python soon swallowed it whole.

Pythons don’t need to eat for another whole year because the springboks are really huge. The more the pythons eat the longer they can survive without food. As soon as the year goes by the pythons start to hunt for food again. Pythons can also stay underwater for 15 minutes, if they need to breathe they will only put their nostrils out of the water.

Trapped Inside The Warehouse

WALT: write a narrative with focus on a powerful intro.

Trapped Inside The Warehouse

“La la la la la la la la ahhhhhh!” Ally gasps. “OMG. That is one beautiful dress. Mum, mum can we go to the mall? I have found this nice dress and I really want it. Please mama please.” “ Fine then, but we have to go after 7o,clock because I have an important meeting.” said her mum.

“ I’m getting a new dress, I’m getting a new dress.” happily sang Ally. “ Quickly though because it is very late and you have school tomorrow. angrily said her mum. Ally looked for the dress in all the stores until she remembered that the shop was called “ The Warehouse.” “ Which direction is the Warehouse.” “ Quickly Ally before they close the Warehouse.” Ally runs everywhere and she finally finds the Warehouse.

As soon as she got inside the Warehouse a announcement went off. “ Ladies and gentlemen the store is about to close in 5 minutes.” Ally wasn't interested in the announcement and started searching for the dress. As soon as she found it, people were closing up and locking the gates. Ally didn't know because she was putting and fitting on the dress.

Ally realized that there was no chatter in the store. She quickly got changed and went out of the dressing room. She only saw her mum but no one else. She was surprised. She saw the gates closed and no one around. Ally was nervous and started to cry. Then they realized that the Warehouse wasn't going to be opened until next Monday.

Just when they thought they were going to be trapped forever, Ally screamed “oh yeah no school tomorrow.” but as she was singing the song she saw a person. He started walking over to them and he said “Why are  you still here?” Ally realized that it was the manager of the store. Ally knew that it was time to go home.

“ Will Ally, wasn't that an adventure?” said Mum. “ Yes it was yes it was.” signed Ally, but she was happy that she had her dress that she has always wanted.